Ignite Talk Feedback - Saving Face

Mr. Bush's feedback: 
-GRADE: B+  - good view
- narrative and genre covered
- terminology, and good examples
- wider context included/campaigns
- fluent, good paced

WWW:  I had included most of MI GRAIN, I had mentioned any awards/wider context.
 I believe the presentation was well timed, as I didn't wait for slides to move on, or talk over the wrong slide.

EBI: I included more about the documentary, so story line - rather than the producers and achievements.

How can I turn this into a top quality presentation? 
I will need to carry out extensive research on legislation in countries where Acid Attacks are common, look into detail with campains such as 'PROJECT SAAVE' - and exactly what they do.

Ignite Talk: Saving Face PPT

Saving Face Ppt

1 'Acid attack survivors network in Bangladesh'



2 'India is taking acid attacks more seriously'




3 'Bolshoi ballet acid attack: where dance means life and death'

4 'Woman guilty of acid attack on friend while disguised in niqab'

5 'Zanzibar acid attack: women's families speak of frustration'