Mr. Bush's feedback:
-GRADE: B+ - good view
- narrative and genre covered
- terminology, and good examples
- wider context included/campaigns
- fluent, good paced
WWW: I had included most of MI GRAIN, I had mentioned any awards/wider context.
I believe the presentation was well timed, as I didn't wait for slides to move on, or talk over the wrong slide.
EBI: I included more about the documentary, so story line - rather than the producers and achievements.
How can I turn this into a top quality presentation?
I will need to carry out extensive research on legislation in countries where Acid Attacks are common, look into detail with campains such as 'PROJECT SAAVE' - and exactly what they do.
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